Wednesday, February 12, 2014

A moment in time poem

We chose a time in our holidays where we experienced enjoyment or showed determination when something challenged us. We tried to add in detail so the reader could paint a picture in their head. We had fun using an app called 'Visual Poet' to publish them for others to read.






Room 10 has been writing just like this. Click on the link to read Mrs Roil's and some of Room 10's writing

3 comments:

  1. Wow Room 8 you have some pretty scary and believable storys I can think of many things you guys did Wow

    Whiai Te ItI Kahurangi reach for the stars

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  2. Wow room 8 and bowen amazing work you caan perfectly see what you guys are doing in your life.

    Whiaia Te iti Kaunrangi Reach for the stars

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  3. Keep It up room 8 i like your stories!











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